Writing



During Terms 1 and 2 we have been writing stories. I was in Jodie’s group, she did a plan then we went off and did your own plan then we came back and she asked who she could start the story. She would write 1 paragraph then she said that we have to go and write our 1 paragraph and we did that until we have finished. We did a Andy Griffiths story and I think it was a good story, my spelling was good and my editing was good as well and my plan was better. I felt good in Jodie’s group. Some of the other stories we had done was Portal story, Letter to Cadbury and Animal story. I like writing about good stories. My plans have improved a lot well I think. Here is a demo of a plan:

Intro: Characters, Where is the stoty is set, When the story is set.

Middle: The first paragraph is the start of the problam.

The second paragraph is were the problam gets worse.

The third paragraph is were the problam gets a little better.

End: Were the problam is fixed.

Here is my Andy Griffiths story:



Here is my Portal story:



Here is my Letter to Cadbury: